A short but Shocking Ghost story :O

Ghost light

Be Afraid. Be Very Afraid.

As usual, I was sitting in my room and browsing the net. It was around 11:45 PM in the night and am usually awake at that time. I like the silence of the night. And the stillness. And the darkness.

But this night was unusually silent. And still. And dark. I could feel the stillness within me. Around me.

Though the computer was connected to the net, my thoughts were somewhere else. Somewhere far away, somewhere deep, somewhere…

Suddenly, the net gets disconnected. For no reason. But, that happens. I just need to wait for sometime before it gets reconnected. It’s silent around and it’s the night. I am at peace with myself during this time, usually. So, no problem.

I turn around to see what else I could do. There was a mirror in one corner of my room. As I approach it, the lights go off. The current gets cut! Ah, the EB department. I fire them in my mind and light a candle.

Oh, the candle light. It hurts my eyes. I hate fire. Anyway, got to live with it for today.

All the stillness of that night was replaced by some sound just outside my house. Someone was coming. I check the time, it’s almost 12 AM in the mid night. Who could it be? Visitors don’t come in at this time.

There is some sound and the front door lock is opened. I could hear it.

Oh my God! Could it be a thief opening the door with a set of duplicate keys? But wait, there’s another door. This one has an electronic lock. Difficult to break.

Another minute passes. The second lock is also opened. Was it broken? No. It was just smoothly opened. Someone had the duplicate keys to our house!

I stood frozen in my room. I didn’t know what to do. Do I shout and wake up the neighbors, call the police with my cell phone? The candle light goes away too.

There is only me in this house. And a candle without light. And fear. And darkness.

One person opens the door of my room. He is almost my height. But it’s too dark to see who it is.

Just in that moment, the power comes back. I am just five feet away from that person. I can see him clearly now.

He’s wearing the same shirt as mine. The same trousers, as well. Wait a minute, he looks just like me! My God, He is Me!!

We stare at each other in disbelief and shock. Two people just like each other. In the same house. There were no words. Only silence. And my favorite stillness.

My family members gather behind him and all of them look at me strangely. How can I tell them that he was a ghost? Won’t they be shocked?

The candle falls down. I bend down to take it, and what do I see? I have no legs! But the other person standing in the opposite, has legs!

That means?

Yes. I was the ghost!

I show them my real figure. Which is,

This:

Skeleton halloween

Image credit: Sister72. This image is published under this creative commons license.

And then I Vanish.

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA

😀

Destination Infinity

PS: Before cursing me in your minds, please know that I was inspired by this blog post, written on a similar topic 🙂

42 thoughts on “A short but Shocking Ghost story :O

  1. sm

    lol
    nice stroy
    good stuff for a movie

  2. Bikram

    copyright it quick otherwise Ram gopal verma will make a movie on this ..

    good one D.I.

  3. Nita

    🙂 🙂 Nowadays I have started enjoying horror stories!

  4. uma

    The conclusion was bit funny and I enjoyed your post 🙂

  5. Jas

    ha ha 😀 Just the way your inspiration unfolded…

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  7. Ruprekha Mushahary

    OMG, felt it was little spooky as I proceeded …. but the end was hilarious 🙂
    Loved the story 🙂 🙂

  8. rahul aggarwal

    and it reminded me of the movie “The Others” starring Nicole Kidman ..

    you must watch that movie Rajesh !

  9. bharathidasan
    bharathidasan says:

    watch 6th sense too.. anyway good narration.. continue posting such stories…

  10. Lubna

    Hi
    Thanks for stopping by my blog. Scary stuff, this. I wonder if I will sleep tonight. 😎

  11. Ashwathy

    Good attempt. The ending almost choked me … I was trying not to laugh in office 😀 😛

  12. Reema

    Huh???????

  13. vahid

    It works but astonishment, and a little fear.

  14. Jazlin dhan
    Jazlin dhan says:

    It ws gud but not vry spooky story keep posting these typ of stories but try to keep lip more horror things in it

  15. Pankaj Rajoria
    Pankaj Rajoria says:

    hahahahahaha….
    Too gd…

  16. jahangir hussain
    jahangir hussain says:

    realy i enjoy ur post ilove that

  17. Srikanth

    It is a very little story, but starting it is expected more terrible, finally nothing to fear.

  18. ramyakrishna

    very intersting and funny storie ….good staff for movie

  19. Watsapp swamiji
    Watsapp swamiji says:

    @ “The ghost you saw”
    Appreciate your twist…. enjoy ur legless travel… 😛

  20. shiva

    Super joke bro

  21. Shaik

    Hai dear…i scared but enjoyed ur blog…i hope it was the horror expirience in ur life…..

  22. Nizam

    you got me there…pheww!!

  23. abinsha.np

    im too long at ghost but im just mind ghost storyis 😀

  24. roshu

    Oh God save me from this rubbish story ……fool no.1

  25. mythili

    you made fool of ourselves 😀

  26. manoj kumar raju
    manoj kumar raju says:

    nice story i like the climax
    and if u tell ramgopal varma he will make a nice movie with u r story

  27. mcms

    lol ….i got scared 😮 😉

  28. Akhil

    this story is too pooooooooookkkkkkkkkyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

  29. Sneha A B

    Oh!! u gave me heart attack!!!

  30. ridam

    i was very scared when i was reading it…..but d nding twisted it all…nyc..keep it up

  31. Surya

    i am not scared.better luck next time

  32. Albin

    Super I enjoyed it

  33. Sandi

    Hahha! That was good.

    I like how you said this:

    “There is only me in this house. And a candle without light. And fear. And darkness.”

    1. Sandi

      Came back again! 🙂

      This reminds me of the movie The Others.

  34. xxx

    good but next time we will make more suspense in your story

  35. sindhuja

    Oh god…. thought it was true…post more stories like this

  36. Sanjeeb

    I already got the hint that its a fake ghost story during the onset, as one who sees a ghost doesn’t write like that . LOL, nice though.

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